Improvement in Writing Essay!

I studied a lot of new knowledge and feel better in writing essays so much after this quarter.

I remembered that the first essay that I wrote is so bad. It had a lot of mistake in grammar and spell. Also, my thesis statement is not clearly because it couldn't control idea of this essay. Moreover, body paragraphs are also not good because they didn't have the clear topic sentences and exact example to support for the essay.Therefore, I had a bad grade with this essay. After that, I also recognized many amazing things. I know that the styles of writing in the US is very different from my country. When I wrote compositions in my country, I didn't need to write thesis statement, hook or something like that. In the other words,that the styles of writing in my country is implied. People seldom say anything clearly, such as: There are 2 reason why I like this. They just write generally and pronoun "we" is often used as common sense.

Now, I have more experience to write the good essay. Mainly, I can write the thesis statements more clearly and exactly. I also analyst topics to choice the good methods to write, such as: contrast, cause-effect, narrative or argumentative. Besides, I understand that to have a good essay, the writes should write compound and complex sentences as many as possible. Moreover, transition words is very important to make a good essay. Depending on the kinds of the essays, the writes use different transitions. This makes the essays more interesting and perfect. Reference information is also contribute essay better, so to have a good essay, we should spend a little time to research information on the internet or library to understand the topic that we write more. Actually, I am better in writing than the first time I wrote, but I can not control the time that I must write. I often write the essays slowly. This is not good for me in the test which had limited time.

It is my first quarter, but I wrote a lot of essays. Sometimes, I feel tired but I love writing. However, I don't like to chose topic by myself to write. I like writing the topics that teacher request because I can't good topics. Also, I will try my best more and studied more information when writing topics that I never know. This also make me reflex faster in the examinations.

I hope that after this quarter, I can write faster but it is still true in grammar, spell and good in content. Hope you have 2 final weeks in this quarter fun and study well.