
I studied a lot in this quarter, but I think that I need study more. In this quarter, I studied how to write a good essay in different kinds of essay, such as: comparison, argumentative essays. Also, I studied how to make a good hook, thesis statement, and topic sentences. To have a better essay, I should research outside information to convince readers more easily. A good essay does not use only some simple sentences. Writes must use a lot of complex or compound sentences to make the essay interesting. Actually, I studied a lot of new things, and I also feel better than the first time that I wrote essay. However, I want to study more. I really want to study how to write the good essay in the short time. When I write the essays in the short time, I feel uncomfortable. My mind cannot think any good topic, example or explanation. In addition, I get a lot of mistakes in grammar and spell. I remember that in mid-term, I wrote essay in 2 hours. I really felt nervous, so I tried my best to concentrate to find the good idea to support for my essay. Also, I must spend 5 minutes to do brainstorm. While I wrote, I had a lot of mistakes in grammar. When I finished, I also spend time to check these mistake. I am afraid of writing essay in class because I can co a good job in the short time with a lot of pressure. I think that practicing maybe is good way to overcome this difficult because when writing a lot, I will recognize what my mistakes are. I hope that in 2 final weeks, Monika will give me and my classmates a lot of tips to write a good essay in the short time without any problems so that I could do final exam well. :))) How about you??? Do you want to study the same thing with me??hihi.
yes I want!!
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